Thursday, October 18, 2012

Screenplay For "Les Mis" *Updated!

Whoa. Universal released the WHOLE SCREENPLAY for the Les Mis film. Then took it down. But read this post carefully to find out more...


I'm reading the script now.
Random thoughts as I read (page numbers follow the PDF numbers in Mac Preview, NOT the numbers on the head of the pages). One of my favorite additions is a bit about Fantine selling her teeth. It's so great and truly heartbreaking--and from the book! This whole screenplay adds way more in from the original novel than we ever could have hoped.
--The added lyrics I've seen are really good.
More...coming...after work lol.



--The transition from the "Prologue" to "End of the Day" is exactly how I hoped it would be.
--The have Fantine defend herself in "End of the Day" by ALSO singing the line, "At the end of the day she’s the one who began it!" (page 18)
--Javert gets his own actual introduction song. Interesting idea.  (page 20-21)
--"Runaway Cart" is moved up to right after "End of the Day" (page 21) There is no "I have only known one other..." scene.
--Valjean says to Fauchelevent, "No more cart driving for you!" (page 23) That line better stay.
--"Lovely Ladies" is accompanied by a man on an organ grinder. (page 24) Oh alright.
--Fantine sells her teeth! (page 26)
--Here's your reward for reading this far.
--The main brothel is in the hull of an old ship. Also the whole "Lovely Ladies" sequence sounds like it's gonna be insane and perfect.
--On pages 29 and 30 we have "I Dreamed a Dream," and there isn't much staging info given. So we'll see how it all works out, but I'm sure it'll be beautiful and devastating.
--Bamatabois stuffs snow down Fantine's shirt (page 31). More book references!
--Also on page 31, Bamatabois is given the direction, "Furious but aroused." Oh alright.
--Page 35, we have a new-ish scene between Javert and Valjean. It's an improved version of the "I have only known one other..." scene from the show. It's actually closer (once again) to the book, where Javert admits that he denounced Valjean to the French authorities, but now knows it was a mistake as the "real"culprit has been caught.
--Page 38, we kinda get a line back from the Original London Cast that I always loved. Valjean used to yell, at the end of "Who Am I?", "You know where to find me!" He says her, "Ask inspector Javert. He knows where to find me." But I doubt Hugh is gonna scream/sing it like Colm did.
--Oh my god pages 38-39, as Fantine dies, she hallucinates seeing Cosette and WE SEE IT. Gonna just start crying now.

--Page 42: Young Eponine what???
--Page 44: AHHH THEY PUT THE "SERGEANT OF WATERLOO" OPENING BACK IN TO "MASTER OF THE HOUSE." Or, at least, a good bit of it.
--Truly getting Sweeney Todd flashbacks as I read Mme Thénardier tricking customers to come into the inn.
--I'm not sure how the flashbacks to daytime are gonna work in "Master of the House." They struck me as bizarre, but we'll see how it turns out.
--Whoa they steal from Father Christmas. What even.
--Okay "Master of the House" is gonna be insane.
--They also have the scene at the well between Cosette and Valjean! (page 49-50)
--Page 52, they kept the "Colette/Cosette" gag, a long-running stage gag.
--Page 53 and 54, we see Javert visiting the Thénardiers, asking if Valjean picked up Coestte, and trying to get info from them. THEN, the Thénardiers mention sing about how they should have gotten more out of Valjean, SETTING UP THE ROBBERY IN PARIS AND FINALLY CLEARING UP THAT STUPID PLOT POINT THAT NEVER MADE SENSE IN THE SHOW!
--Page 53-54, we have the new song "Suddenly." Excited to hear it, but just reading the words leaves me kinda meh. We'll see.
--They have the famous chase scene between Javert and Valjean (with Cosette being dragged along), THEN they get to the convent and M Fauchelevent is there at the convent, like in the book! (Page 55-57).
--Page 58-59 gives us the introduction of Gavroche, and at the bottom of page 59 we have an AWESOME new verse for Gavroche about the state of the monarchy in France. Whoa. It also contains the lines, "Here is the thing about equality/everyone's equal when they're dead!"--which, to me, recall a similar set of lines from the 1980 Paris cast: "Entre nous et les bourgeois/C’est avec la mort, ma foi,/Le seul moment où y’a pas de différence." ("Between us and the bourgeois/it's then and death/the only moments where there isn't any difference between us"--the other moment referred to is when having sex, but I still feel like poor people have sex differently than bougie folks.)
--"Look Down" is now this: chorus "Look Down," two Gavroche verses, and the "Where are the leaders of the land?" bit. It ends with the police breaking up the crowd (who have gathered in front of Lamarque's house). We lose the "Where'd'ya think you're at, hangin' round me pitch?" verses and the bits associated.
--PAGE 62 HOLY CRAP M GILLENORMAND IS THERE WHAT EVEN. He admonishes Marius for "behaving like a child." Marius is like, "Peace, gramps," and leaves to go to...
--...GORBEAU TENEMENT, a crap hole of a place. Guess where that's from? Yup, DA BOOK. Also page 62.
--Pontmercy family ring, check; Eponine creeping on Marius through a hole, check; Marius being wayyyy dismissive of Eponine--super check. Still...page...62. We also have Eponine calling out Marius on being rich but "pretending to be poor."
--Also, bottom of page 62 (lot's going on on this one page) we have a great new bit between Marius and Eponine that tells us way more about Marius and his family than anything even hinted at in the stage show.
--The meeting of Marius/Cosette is changed. As "Look Down" doesn't have the Thénardiers (with the "these bloody students on our street"), Marius can't ask Eponine who they are. SO, we have him cross Cosette as he's leaving his house to mope. It's shot 33 and 34 here. Page 63.
--After this bit, we cut a little ways down the street to see the Thénardiers preparing their attack. Still page 63.

17 comments:

  1. Next time download the document! If you have a copy, please upload. Thanks!

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  2. David, if you read the post carefully, you may find just what you're looking for.

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    1. Ryan, I've read the post. Universal removed the script. If you have the script, I and many others would most definitely appreciate an upload to read for ourselves -- preferably to something easy like Mediafire.

      Thank again!

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    2. Just...read the post again, paying attention to the part where Fantine sells her teeth...

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    3. Ryan, dude -- I'm being sincere here -- there are people called "Screenwriters" that write these screenplays. The thing we LOVE the most is reading how other screenwriters write their screenplays -- namely produced screenplays.

      If you're telling me to read the novel, that isn't ANY help to me or anyone else that's interested in getting this SCREENPLAY. I'm seeking a technical document, NOT a work of literature and prose.

      IF you have the PDF file, I would VERY much appreciate it... like, seriously! Thanks again. :)

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    4. As a writer myself, I understand the desire to read the actual document, so I'll stop being coy. I hid it so it would be harder to find/make people read my post lol. ANYWAY, here's the link: hxxp://www.sendspace.com/file/2oydg3 (Replace xx to tt).

      Enjoy, sir!

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    5. Ask and you shall receive... my ADMIRATION!

      And in only FOUR minutes? Most impressive, sir.

      THANK YOU!!!

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    6. Love, admiration, I'll take what I can get! No prob. Enjoy the screenplay, and lemme know what you think of it when you're done!

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  3. I love your comments about it. And I must say, after reading your post very carefully, I won't be sleeping tonight :)

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    1. I'm so glad you found something you liked in the post! ;D

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  4. thank you thank you thank you thank you!

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  5. Do you recall reading if Fantine spits on Madeleine/Valjean when he tries to rescue her from Javert like in the book?

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    1. She does not in the screenplay, but I am hoping they drop it into the actual film.

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    2. What's more - do you recall if Fantine is awake during the Confrontation song, like in the book?

      Its been so long since I first saw the show, I forgot how disapointed I was that Fantine died BEFORE the Confrontation instead of after, as in the book - which is the cruelest part of Fantine's fate, IMHO, because she dies fearing for her daughter's safety again.

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    3. It's sort of a mix of both; in the show, she kicks it, then Javert enters. In the screenplay, she sings, 'Tell Cosette I love her and I'll see her when I wake...' Then it says she 'starts convulsing, apparently seeing something over Valjean's shoulder.' Valjean turns around, and there is Javert.

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    4. Does Champmathieu figure any more prominently into the film?

      I remember being disapointed that the musical didn't incorporate the trial of Champmathieu - his interrogation is so hilarious, I thought it would have been perfect for a musical. I wouldn't expect him to get that much screentime, but if the "Who Am I" clip is any indication, there might be some sort need for a transition.

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